Hello, Jessica! I'm Lucy from Paroa School. This is very helpful and easy to read. I like how you have photos, as they make the project more interesting! To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could explain why you did this Lucy
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Hello, Jessica! I'm Lucy from Paroa School.
ReplyDeleteThis is very helpful and easy to read. I like how you have photos, as they make the project more interesting! To be BTB (Better Than Before) you could explain why you did this
Lucy
Morning Jessica, fantastic work on this cyber smart challenge!
ReplyDeleteHi' i'm Kohen from paroa school. I really like your work. Maybe next time you could add a little bit of a longer caption.
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